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Writing 4: The voice

For this post, I will be giving an update on my writing class activity .
I will be showing a sample of my first draft as well as establishing the point of view of my project.

Direction


When we were giving this task,the first thing i did was to look for a template for my business plan. This is because using a template which would be like a  form of guide for my writing and i found one on Score ,a website that assist young and growing entrepreneurs .In my previous post ,I posted a table where i analysed my fruit company structure . So i reused that same structure for my fruit but i made a few necessary changes.
I know my project idea is to create a snack business and that is what the template should explain but being that it was my first draft i decided to leave it that way to show it was an initial plan.
TO VIEW .CLICK HERE:The voice/First draft

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  1. Zoe Van-de-VeldeAugust 11, 2019 at 1:26 PM

    Good start I am looking forward to seeing this really develop

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