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REVIEWING MY BLOG BUDDY'S POST

In this post,i am going to review altan's blog.

she took some classes in 2018 but she resumed late 2019. therefore her only post this year is introducing me as her blog buddy. so i'll be reviewing her old posts.
I like the layout of her blog and I like that her profile picture shows her being lively. however,i noticed that some images are not loading and zoey,our tutor,made some comment about it and no changes have been made.


This post is one of my favourite because it shows the importance of the mobile phone. it shows the different features of the phone and why we should appreciate it more.it is also the most detailed work in her blog.
i think altan is very creative and artistic but she needs to put more time and her effort on her blog so that she can catch up

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